following the feedback from my focus group I have...
- Added a title saying the song, who's stars in it and who made it
- Added the main singer Jude right at the start playing the guitar with a green backdrop to reference the environment and to incorporate his presence earlier on
- Used intertextuality from 'Bob Dylan's subterranean blues' music video intertextuality with Jude holding up key handwritten core lyrics on paper
- I have also replaced the TV scene of the News-reporter, in order to have Jude clearly shown holding a sign about the dangers of the world ending, to avoid losing marks for not using original content
- While Joanna's asleep, instead of a high opacity of Jude in order to blend in with the scene, I have put him holding signs up relating to the extent of human damage on the climate, so it links to the narrative and makes clear why Joanna suddenly wants to be environmental
- However this scene doesn't yet look entirely like he's in her dream, so will have to edit this further later on
- Put Jude on the TV holding a sign saying 'Join the Rebellion' which clearly links to why Joanna proceeds to follow extinction rebellion on social media
- Incorporated footage of Jude holding blue # signs, which are meant to reflect twitter and are held before Joanna does something eco-friendly
- Replaced a bad Gopro footage of Joanna riding bike on dark and cracked concrete with brighter better footage
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