feedback from draft 1- from the focus group:
1.Do a tighter zoom on the guy lip syncing, perhaps jump between zooms
2.I like the shot of Joanna looking on twitter
bit confused at the lip-syncing of Jude
Great for TA-very Mass-market idea
3.Not sure about using videos of the news or the Simpsons
Some shots of Joanna on bike may need editing, as she stares at the camera at one point
Put it more Videos of Jude, as it is a bit sudden
4. I like the intertextuality/ postmodernism involved in it
very topical and culturally relevant
I was a bit confused as to who the boy was
love the shot of the laptop and twitter- very postmodern and an incorporation of Andrew Goodwin's theory - screens within screens.
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